I created:

https://www.avsubtitles.com/subtitles.php?subid=23540

And someone said it's only a DRAFT. He/she did not post a comment, so I am clueless, what I did wrong.

I worked on the sub-titles for a few hours today, but I added SDH mostly.

Could you help me?

Best regards, Freejack

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KIMMY: Okay.



Hey, Dad! Um, are you busy right now?

Um ...

What is it, Laura?

This better not be about the camping trip. Me and
your mother talked to you, and we told you -

No, no, no, no, no.

So you know how
I'm in Bio #1, right?

Well, Miss Gleason put us in partner study
today, and she paired us up together.

(...)


Honey, what happened to your friend is,

it's terrible.

But we're not running a hostel here.


I know, but she's actually literally
on the street right now.
She doesn't have anywhere to go.
What if something happened to
her? Wouldn't you feel guilty?

And we have that guest
bedroom that we never use.



Look, Hon, we haven't even met her yet.

I know, but I mean, she's so
smart and independent, and
I promise as soon as you meet
her, you will love her, Dad.

Here is the full story:
https://hot-board.net/showthread.php?12619-Erotic-Stories&p=7532613#post7532613

I created this story from the subtitles, so any help what is wrong with the subtitles is greatly appreciated.

Hi,
Your subtitle is not bad. But some sentences are too long, you have to break the line. Other sentences have multiple speakers on a single line. And be careful with the timecode, it ends when the next one starts, that's not good. Some video-players may have bugs because of this.
And don't write but , same with other actors, write the name of their caracters.
Always put a "-" before each line when there are two speakers in the same subtitle.
These are the problems i see.

Sorry i'm rewriting this:
And don't write Kimmy but Laura, same with other actors, write the name of their caracters.

Thank you very, very much for your response and your feedback. I'm on it.

Ok, done.

Removed, Kimmy, Alexis, Seth ...
Longest line should be 48, with 2 exceptions:

This better not be about the camping trip. Me and
your mother talked to you, and we told you -

and

Well, Miss Gleason put us in partner study
today, and she paired us up together.


They speak so fast, I cannot cut the sentence in the middle.

Could someone give me PLEASE a better rating than DRAFT? :-)

Some subtitles are still too long, like the 668, and i think 669 is a duplicate of 668 (or for Whisper, it's a hallucination)
I've got the subtitle in vtt format (with some timing issues), so i can compare yours with it. Some transcriptions are a little different. (example : 718 "your crocth" should be "your cock")
I see you added some characters's thoughts. ^^
Not bad at all.